Great God.

I know that you are a Great God, never failing and never wrong. You shape me to be a better person, in You. You always direct me in Your way. Some things I do not understand, but I still believe in You.

Thanks God. Love You.

(I would probably drop "in You" as well unless it has theological significance to what you are trying to say )

Great God.

I see that You are Great God, never fail and wrong. You shape me to be a better person in You. You always threat me with Your way. Some way that I'm not understand, but I believe in You.

Thanks God. Love You.

I see that You are Great, God; You never fail and You are never wrong. You shape me to be a better person (in You). You always threat[?] me with Your way. [show me Your way ?]

There are some ways that I do not understand, but I believe in You.

Thank you God. I love You.