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Grown up and living at home Do you still remember what age do you leave home?Now it's very comme living at home with parents,in UK it's about 26% people,about 3.3million, residing in the some roof with their parents,even some married couple.They can not rent or buy a house,due to economic downturn,so they house may becomea a bit cramped.Some people choose living out,they share their accommodation,just like flatshare,due to woke in other countries or go to university.Living at home may influence your professonal,if you still looked at by your mum,you may not independence,you may can not ask your friends go to you home,so it may influence your career.I have to admit there are some positive.you may do not pay bill,you do not need wishing,make bed,you living for free,it's incentive.I think as a adult,we should indenpendence and have our own living place.

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Grown up and living at home

Do you still remember what age do you you were when you leave left home? Now it's very common for people to live at home with their parents. In the UK it's about 26% of <young?> people, about 3.3million, who are residing in under the same roof with as their parents. Some of them are even some married couples. They can not rent or buy a house, due to the economic downturn, so their house may become a bit cramped. Some people choose to live out apart from their parents. They share their accommodation, just like a flatshare, due to woke working in other countries or going to university. Living at home may influence your professional life. If you still continue to be looked at after by your mum, you may not develop independence; you may can not be able to ask your friends to go to you home, so it may influence your career. I have to admit there are some positives. You may do not have to pay bills. You do may not need to do your own washing, or make your own bed. You may be able to live for free - that's an incentive! However, I think, as a adults, we should become more independent and have our own living place (Normally we say, our own place, or our own living space.).

 

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