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I want to make frients with you Hello everyone,do you recently feel good?I am a 16-year-old girl.I think I am a friendly and outgoing people,and I like hairy animal such as cat ,because I think they are so cute.My best hobby is drawing,and I also like listening music,playing basketball and eating all kinds of food and so on.Do you like this me?I want to make friends with you.

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I want to make frients with you

Hello everyone,do you recently feel good?I am a 16-year-old girl.I think I am a friendly and outgoing people,and I like hairy animal such as cat ,because I think they are so cute.My best hobby is drawing,and I also like listening music,playing basketball and eating all kinds of food and so on.Do you like this me?I want to make friends with you.

 

I want to be friends with you

Hello everyone, how are you?* I am a 16 year old girl. I think I am a friendly and outgoing person, and I like furry animals such as cats, because I think they are so cute. My best hobby is drawing, and I also like listening to music, playing basketball, andeating all kinds of food, and so on.** Do you like this about me? I want to be*** friends with you.

 

* how are you = Your sentence is not incorrect, but "how are you" is better to say.

** so on= If you are going to say 'so on' at the end of your sentence you should not put 'and' at the beinning, just a comma. (,)

*** be = You can say 'make', but 'be' is better.

 

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With me? =)
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I am sami from Pakistan, I love design as it's the part of day today job. I love making new friends. I need to work on communication skills. I hope our partnership would save us
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Hello, my name is Gustavo and I from Brazil. If you want, we can talk about many things what you say, improve and practice our English. I love arts and I am learning a draw too. Will be pleasure.
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I would like to be your friend :3 I'm 14 years old (and am female too!)

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