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My notebook My love I fell in love with him at the first sight . He isn’t handsome ,rich and perfect but he is helpful and kind .He helped me to get over my fear .I was happy when was stayed together . For all the reasons, day by day I recognized that he became my strength .At that time , I wanted to hug and say “ I love you” but I couldn’t because he had girlfriend already . They love each other so much so I could not separate them . I had to give up my first love . I just prayed that they were happy .Just because love isn’t getting but giving . I wrote hís name in my heart in order for it to stay in my heart forever . I believe in true love coming me one day , I will wait a person who takes my hand and we go to the end of our life. (9-10-2014 _ puputran ) Life in the city Life in the city is full of activities .When the Sun rises, I wake up and my new day begins . I get out of my house and walk on the closed street. The street is full of traffic . Then I wait for the bus and go to school. In the bus , I can see many things such as : Store is opened , workers work in workshop, children go to school. …and people do many different work. When the scenery is full of darkness, It is the most beautiful time of a day . The streets are full of colorful lights. The air is cooler and you feel freshr after a hard working day . It is time when you and your family stay together . Me too,. At the night , I always stay with my parent and I talk to them about my day in the school so that distance of our hearts is getting shorter.Then I do my homework . Before I go to bed , I always listen to music or read story . It is easy for me to fall asleep. At middle night, you think activities are stoped, don’t you? You are wrong . I will explain for you . There are many people wait for the coming of night become active . At dark , they break into another home so that steal valuable things . Sometimes they kill another . It is very scary. They are thieves who have no conscience

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My notebook

My love
I fell in love with him at the first sight . He isn’t handsome, rich, or perfect, but he is helpful and kind. He helped me to get over my fear. I was happy when we was stayed together. For all the these reasons, day by day, I recognized that he became my strength. At that time, I wanted to hug him and say “ I love you”, but I couldn’t because he had a girlfriend already. They love each other so much so I could not separate them. I had to give up my first love. I just prayed that they were happy. Just because love isn’t getting receiving, but giving. I wrote hís name in my heart in order for it to stay in my heart forever . I believe in true love coming to me one day. , I will wait for a person who takes my hand and we go to the end of our lives life.
(9-10-2014 _ puputran )
Life in the city
Life in the city is full of activities. When the Sun sun rises, I wake up and my new day begins. I get out of my house and walk on the closed street. The street is full of traffic . Then I wait for the bus and go to school. In On the bus , I can see many things such as : a store is opened , workers working in a workshop, children going to school. …and people doing many different work jobs.
When the scenery is full of darkness Twighlight,  It is the most beautiful time of a day . The streets are full of colorful lights. The air is cooler, and you feel fresher after a hard working day . It is the time when you and your family stay together . Me too,. At the night , I always stay with my parents, and I talk to them about my day in the at school so that distance of our hearts is become closer getting shorter.Then I do my homework . Before I go to bed , I always listen to music or read story . It is easy for me to fall asleep.
At middle night By midnight, you would think activities are have stoped, don’t wouldn't you? You are would be wrong . I will explain for you. There are many people who wait for the coming of night become nightfall before becoming active . At dark night, they break into another other homes so that to steal valuable things . Sometimes they kill another others. It is very scary. They are thieves who have no conscience.

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