Stampede Accident
Terriblely there was a stampede accident in Shanghai at 2015 New Year Eve .36 people died and 46 peolple hurt at the time , the point what is that almost all youngster got hurt .
After that ,considerable kinds of comments appear which say youngster shall not go to the Boud at that night because of so many people ,acctually it cannot be seen so much scenery with so many people around ,secondly ,people weren't aware of that there exists danger with so many people .thirdly ,orgnaization of the activity also had responsibility of this issue ,they didn't make totally preparation about the Boud acctivity , which made so many people in sadness at the beginning of the 2015 .
In a word , despite the government or the citizens ,we both need to learn something useful to protect ourselves in somewhere emergency ,danger is in everywhere , if only you have always been noticing it ,the danger maybe far from you .
I wish everyone have a happy new year .
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Stampede Accident
Terriblely There was a terrible stampede accident in Shanghai at 2015 on New Year's Eve of 2015. 36 people died and 46 peolple people were hurt at the time. the point what is that Almost all of those affected youngster got hurt were relatively young.
After that, considerably many kinds of comments have begun to appear which say youngster young people shall should not have gone to the Boud at that night because of so many people it was too crowded. Actually it cannot be seen so much scenery it would have been difficult to see anything very well with so many people around. Secondly, people weren't aware of that there exists danger with so many people that extremely crowded places could be so dangerous. Thirdly, orgnaizers of the activity also had were responsible of this issue. They didn't make totally thorough enough preparation about for the Boud activity, which made has caused so many people in sadness at the beginning of the 2015.
In a word, despite it doesn't matter whether we speak of the government or the citizens, we both parties need to learn something useful to protect ourselves in somewhere emergency from this tragedy to prevent ourselves from repeating it. Danger is in everywhere, but if only if you have always been noticing have remained aware of it will the danger maybe remain far from you .
I wish everyone have a happy new year.
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Yes, it was a real shame that people died at a celebration. There are many lessons to be learned. Hopefully, they will be learned and the knowledge used to change the future. There should be better planning. There should be consideration given to all the age groups of people who might be present.
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If you live in Shanghai ?it's a nice place where has so much interestings places such as oriental tower and some other ancient downtowns ,especially some Shanghai owned style culture. but there always some disadvantages in it ,since it is one of the most popular citys in China ,it always exsits so many people ,no matter people living here or the tourists paying a visit .so the problem is the number of the population .so big ,it is not convinient to visit some palces on festival holidays in Shanghai.)
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I am very sad to heart that this accident againt.because Shanghai where in my counry is my favorite city.What do you think the Shanghai city objectively?
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