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Daily life ... Isn't it a bit strange?When you are walking along the street , You can see a large number of people .You try to smile .But they look at you as you are a bothersome person. Sigh, what's going on in this world? You turn your head down and carry on your walking.after that you turn you head up into sky. Then you notice the beautiful sky, happy birds that are singing freely while they are flying.You take deep breath and wear a smile again but suddenly you notice somebody is looking at you as you are a mad ! You pretend that you didn't notice him. He is passing in front of you while he is still looking at you as you are mad ! You look up , he is gone . the birds as well. sigh, you carry on your walking.The sun is going down , You afraid of staring at sky. You turn you head around , Lot's of cars ( mostly with black and white color) . All people seem tired , All seem they are busy themselves . they never notice what is going on in their world. Sky is dark now. Another day was finished again. You think with yourself " do you like their life?" you wear smile . What a beautiful sky is the night sky. You wear smile again...:)

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Daily life ...

Isn't it a bit strange? When you are walking along the street, You can see a large number of people, you try to smile but they look at you as you are a bothersome (boring is better maybe) person.. Sigh, what's going on in this world? You turn your head down and carry on your walking. After that you turn your head up into sky, then you notice the beautiful sky, happy birds that are singing freely while they are flying, you take a deep breath and wear a smile again, but suddenly, you notice that somebody is looking at you as you are a mad (person/ one/ or simply: as you're mad)! You pretend that you didn't notice him, he is passing in front of passes you while he is still looking at you as you are mad the same way! You look up , he is gone, the birds as well, sigh again, you carry on your walking, the sun is going down & you're afraid of staring at the sky.. You turn your head around, lot's of cars (mostly with black and white color), all people seem tired  All seem they are & busy with themselves, they never (I believe "they'll never notice..etc" is better) notice what is going on in their world.. The sky is dark now, another day is finished again, & you think with yourself (Or: you think within/ within yourself) "do you they like their life lives?" you wear a smile.. What a beautiful sky is the night (Or: evening's one?) sky! You wear a smile again...:)

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Yes, the world is full of people who don't want to become involved--in anything! They are afraid it will cost them something. Money. Time. Freedom. Emotion.
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Nice mist!

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