A formal letter

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I saw your advertisment have seen your advertisement for  about various English classes in The Times. I can see that these classes will be held at your institution in the centre of London.

I'm interested in attending the Advance class of General English taught by the experts of English teaching. However I would like to obtain further information about this class. Would you mind sending me some more detailed information about this particular class and also the latest prospect of the Social Club?

I would also like to enquire acquire further information about accommodation in London, therefore e.g. prices of flats and dorm rooms in the area and in addition other additional costs of living such as food prices and transportation. I would be very grateful for your assistance.

I look forward to hearing from you and hank you in advance.  :) hank you too
 

Yours faithfully,
Bine Teran

A formal letter

I've written this for homework.

Please correct any mistakes and add any suggestions :)



Dear Sir or Madam,

I saw your advertisment for various English classes in The Times newspaper. I can see that these classes will be held at your institution in the centre of London.

I'm interested in attending the Advanced class of General English taught by the experts of English teaching. However I would like to obtain some further information about this class. Would you mind sending me some more detailed information about this particular class and also the latest prospect of the Social Club?

I would also like to enquire request some further information about accommodation in London, therefore such as prices of flats and dorm rooms in the area and in addition other costs of living such as food prices and transportation. I would be very grateful for your assistance.

I look forward to hearing from you and thank you in advance.


Yours faithfully,
Bine Teran