Which would I give up: TV, cell, or the internet.
In present-day era, it is hard to imagine the life without modern technologies. Among all these inventions, the significance of TV, cell and internet remains second to none in our daily life. If I have to give up one thing in those inventions, I would choose to cut off the internet.
Internet is a double-edged sword. It is undeniable that the internet has brought us much convenience. In the meanwhile, however, the internet is also destroying the quality of life. Some people may be so accustomed to communications online that they may fail to grasp the skills needed in real-life interpersonal communications. Should such a trend continue, it would definitely give rise to some undesirable result in the long run. Additionally, as my inability to control myself, I may easily be addicted to internet, which is not only a waste of time but can also result in the decline of my scores.
In conclusion, as the old saying goes, every coin has its two sides, the internet is a big step towards modern society, it is high time that we should try not to rely so heavily on it.
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Which would I give up: TV, cell phone or the internet?
In present-day era, it is hard to imagine the life without modern technologies. Among all these inventions, the significance of the TV, the cell phone and the internet, remains second to none in our daily life lives. If I have to give up one thing of those inventions, I would choose to cut off the internet.
The Internet is a double-edged sword. It is undeniable that the internet has brought us much convenience. In the meanwhile At the same time, however, the internet is also destroying the quality of life. Some people may be so accustomed to communications online that they may fail to grasp the skills needed in real-life interpersonal communications. Should such a trend continue, it would definitely give rise to some undesirable result in the long run. Additionally, as my inability to control myself, I may easily be addicted to the internet, which is not only a waste of time but can also result in the decline of my scores.
In conclusion, as the old saying goes, every coin has its two sides, the internet is a big step towards modern society, it is high time that we should try not to rely so heavily on it.
[ Plus, it is a topic in the English textpaper]
SUPER (Y) I HONESTLY ENJOYED READING THIS. YOU HAD SOLID AND CONCRETE POINTS. THIS ESSAY WAS COHERENT AND CONVINCING; I WAS LITERALLY CAUGHT UP IN READING IT. IN FACT, I DID A TOPIC VERY SIMILAR TO THIS FOR MY ORAL SPANISH AND FRENCH EXAMINATIONS.
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Your English seems to be on a very good level; a whole new realm from others that i have encountered. I drew this conclusion by the way you delivered yourself, it was natural, very hard to tell you were not an English native.
However, i do hope we can become language exchange partners.
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