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An Imaginary letter to a Tv station. Can you help me with the corrections?
Dear Madam;
I'm sorry to complain with through this letter about the bad programming of your television station. I don't like to watch programs that talk about quarrels between neighbours, or soap-operas ( boring and always with the same old stories and plot readapted). I'd like to see in the afternoons something more interesting, like a documentary about history or nature. Then and in the evenings I'd like to have, as main choice, a long list of movies that attract my curiosity and stimulate my senses. I guess that a programming that follows my advices would be better for the spectators, and could involve a larger part portion/ percentage of people, like childs children, that would be happy to watch something of different on (the) TV. In fact, the current programmes concern contain stories of violence, without a any real learning for the people. Every topic in my opinion can be discussed, but always with a specific target goal to achieve, and a useful message to give to the people.
AN EXCELLENT PIECE, THOUGH AN IMAGINERY LETTER, IT WAS FULL OF THOUGHT; I ENJOYED READING THIS.
However, do not mix British and American spelling - choose one. You started out with a British spelling (programmig), so i assumed thats the one you wanted. Therefore, i corrected the american spellings and have highlighted them in yellow.
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! (Y)
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