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The benefits of sport 1 The sport is known in the worldwide. Lot of people practicing a sport or supporting a team. They have a passion for that and it's anchored in their life. During most different sport events like the Olympic Game, Football world cup or even the little local competition, the people come together and support or celebrate their athletes, their team, their countries. So sport allow to bring people together and encourage the passion, the patriotism.. Moreover, when two team clash, the differences of culture, religion or color of skin are forgotten. The importance is to play for the game and nothing else.

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The benefits of sports 1

The sports is are known in the worldwide (I would say: Everyone knows what sports are).  A lot of people practicing play a sport or supporting (no "ing") a team. They have a passion for that, and it's anchored in their life.
During most different sports events like the Olympic Games, Football the world cup or even the little local competitions, the people come together and support or celebrate their athletes, their team, their countries. So sports allow to bring people together and encourage the passion, the patriotism..
Moreover, when two teams clash, the differences of in culture, religion or color of skin are forgotten. The importance important thing is to play for the game (this phrase sounds weird, but I'm not sure how to say it) and nothing else.

 

Hello Kristen! Good entry. If I were you, I would watch YouTube sports videos in English. I think that would improve your grammar. Bonne continuation !

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