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TODAY Today In Spain is holiday. I got up at 9 o'clock and I did some homeworks then I went to a friends' house with other friends to practice a dance for the school. Than I arrived to my house and I ate a deliciuos rice and now I am looking for a web to learn some English because i love this language and in the future I want study some relevant with the English.

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It's a holiday Today in Spain today. is holiday. I got up at 9 o'clock and I did some homeworks then I went to a friends' house with other friends to practice a dance for the school. Than I arrived to my house and When I got home, I ate a some delicious rice and now I am looking for a web to learn some English because I love this language and in the future I want to study something relevant with the in English.

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Today in Spain is holiday. I got up at 9 o'clock and I did some homeworks, then I went to a friend's' house with other friends to practice a dance for the school. Then, I arrived to my house and I ate a deliciouos rice and now I am looking for a website to learn some English because I love this language and in the future I want to study something relevant with the English.

 

The first person pronoun ”I” in English is capitalized at all times, no matter what its place is in a sentence, don't forget that. 
Also, pay attention to ”then” and ”than”:  then is used for a sequence of events and than - for making comparisons. 

Good luck! :) 

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