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My job!
Now, I am going to talk about my job. After I graduated at from college in June last year. I applied for Qsoft Vietnam Company and I got a job. I have been working for nearly 6 months. Overnight, founders decided to separate the company into two.
So, one of them founded his new company. The company's name is GEM (Global Enterprise Mobility), and it was founded in 1st October this year. Because I have joined to a project in its final phase, I usually work extra time and get back home too late. My family doesn't like it. It’s about 12 km from my house to the company. I go to the company by motorbike. Working extra time and going home too late is not safe for me. My mother wants me to find a new job. My company has forty-five employees among them eight women. My colleagues are funny and friendly. The working atmosphere is relaxed. Sometimes, I’m under pressure. We have “Team building” per quarter and we usually go to travel to some famous sights in Vietnam.
My job!
Now, I am going to talk about my job. After I graduated at college in June last year. I applied for Qsoft Vietnam Company and I got a job. I have been working for nearly 6 months. Overnight, founders decided to separate the company into two. So, one of them founded his new company. The company's name is GEM (Global Enterprise Mobility), and it was founded in 1st October this year. Because I have joined to a project in its final phase, I usually work extra time and back home too late. My family doesn't like it. It’s about 12 km from my house to the company. I go to the company by motorbike. Working extra time and going home too late is not safe for me. My mother want me to find a new job. My company has forty-five employees among them eight women. My colleagues are funny and friendly. The working atmosphere is relaxed. Sometimes, I’m under pressure. We have “Team building” per quarter and we usually go to travel to some famous sight in Vietnam.
'I graduated at college' : I graduated from college
'. .last year. I applied for . . ' : last year, I applied to . . OR I applied for a job at . . .
'founders' : the founders Perhaps 'managers' or 'proprietors' would be more appropriate
'to separate the company' : to divide the company
'founded his new company' : founded a new company
'founded in 1st October' : founded on 1st October
'I have joined to a project' : I have joined a project
'and back home too late' : and get back home/arrive home very late
'my house to the company' : my house to my workplace
'My mother want me' : My mother wants me
'My company . . ' : The company . .
'"Team building” per quarter' : “Team building” each quarter
' . . go to travel to . . ' : travel to . .
My job!
Now, I am going to talk about my job. After I graduated at from college in June last year, I applied for Qsoft Vietnam Company and I got a job. I have been working for nearly 6 months. Overnight, founders decided to separate the company into two. So, one of them founded his new company. The company's name is GEM (Global Enterprise Mobility), and it was founded in 1st October this year. Because I have joined to a project in its final phase, I usually work extra time and get back home too late. My family doesn't like it. It’s about 12 km from my house to the company. I go to the company by motorbike. Working extra time and going home too late is not safe for me. My mother wants me to find a new job. My company has forty-five employees, and among them are eight women. My colleagues are funny and friendly. The working atmosphere is relaxed. Sometimes I’m under pressure. We have “Team building” per quarter and we usually go to travel to some famous sight in Vietnam.
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