Essay against the videogames :(

By This time I'm doing an activity that says: your teacher has asked you to write an essay about the following statement. "Computer games are very bad for people and they cause a lot of problems".

I'm going to set forth discuss a controversial topic nowadays: computer games. They started as a simple game for kids to entertain them. But the postion that games have reached in our lives (mejor: our society) has changed.

Games can be addictive, as there are people that spend hours playing. They are just sitting on a chair wasting their time and looking hypnotized the screen. This mean a lack of activity through the day and also a gain on weight gain for those people.

por lo general, no decimos "losing your time" en inglés

This is not the main negative thing; I can explain a few more. They change relationships between people; because of social videogames you lose the experience of talking to one person in a face-to-face meeting. 

Anther point to develop is that the most popular games are the bloody violent ones (no repites "games"). These games may be encouraging an increase in people thinking they are thinking about or doing those things they play in the videogames. And not only thinking they are doing them, also acting like it is not a big deal.  them refiere a "things" así debe ser plural

This is why computer games are negative and can cause problems.

After the essay I want to add that I'm not against the videogames, moreover I love them.

nos gusta la sociedad ser libre pero todos deben usar libertad para el bien o la cultura será mala.  Lo mejor es aprender inglés o cualquier idioma o cualquier hobby, trabajar en el jardin etc.