A fun day

After the arrival of trip to Perú I went to my cousin's house to have a fun day. At night me and my cousin went to buy coke and pizza to eating.
Now I'm writing this text to show to cousins how the Italki works, I'm trying to show them how important is to learn another language.

I hope that someone could help correcting this entry if there is some mistakes! Thanks

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A fun day
After the arrival of trip my to Perú I went to my cousin's house to have a fun day. At night me and my cousin went to buy coke and pizza to eat.
Now, I'm writing this text to show to cousins how Italki works, I'm trying to show them how important is to learn another language.

I hope that someone could help correct this entry to see is there are some mistakes! Thanks

Hope your cousin follows through! It's a great asset to speak another language!

A fun day

After arriving in Peru I went to have some fun at my cousin's. We had coke and pizza for dinner.

I'm trying to show them how important it is to learn another language and how Italki can help them. I hope that someone will correct any mistakes in this entry! Thanks.