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I Am The Master Of My Faith, I Am The Captain Of My Soul Come child, come and sit here Lets gaze together at the sea Is it still blue as it should be? Or turned grey and quite like me? Did they tell you it's easy to swim? Whether the waves are weak or strong Did they warn you about the impossibles? Or kept inspiring you despite everything Oh child you need to find your way For life is not that much easy or gay Believe in yourself to have it all Face the world and to them say: "I am the master of my faith" "I am the captain of my soul"

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I Am The Master Of My Faith, I Am The Captain Of My Soul

Come child, come and sit here
Lets gaze together at the sea
Is it still blue as it should be?
Or turned grey and quite like me?

Did they tell you it's easy to swim?
Whether the waves are weak or strong
Did they warn you about the impossibles?
Or kept inspiring you despite everything

Oh child you need to find your way
For life is not that much easy or gay
Believe in yourself to have it all
Face the world and to them say:
"I am the master of my faith"
"I am the captain of my soul"

 

I will translate your poem into Arabic and I will try to write it as a poem :). Here we are
تعال يا صغيري اجلس معي

لننظر سويا الى البحر

هل لا يزال أزرقا

ام تحول رمادي كأسمي

هل أخبروك ان السباحة سهلة

وان الموج مصروع بضربي.

هل حذروك من المستحيل؟!

أو هابوك كما السيل

أنظر الى نفسك دائما أبدا

و ردد

أنا سيد أمري

أنا سيد قدري...

لا تخف.....

فأن معكوس البحر....

رحب :)

 

بنصرف قليل

I added the last part, thought it would be nice :)

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I Am The Master Of My Faith, I Am The Captain Of My Soul

Come child, come and sit here
Let's gaze together at the sea
Is it still blue as it should be?
Or  has it turned grey, and quite like me?

Did they tell you it's easy to swim?
Whether the waves are weak or strong
Did they warn you about the impossibles?
Or kept inspiring you despite everything?

Oh child, you need to find your way
For life is not that much easy or gay
Believe in yourself to have it all
Face the world and to them, say:
"I am the master of my faith"
"I am the captain of my soul"

 

-Beautiful!!

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This means a lot Ami :) I'm the one who is thankful here and I really appreciate your message and your comment on my entry, you made my day :)
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Really inspiring, Mumtaz. I'm just in awe. Thank you so much for sharing. :)
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@Ali: @Noha: I'm really glad you stopped by and read my entry:) and you both liking it makes me happy:) Thank you very much, I really appreciate.

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