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First notebook entry: Introducing myself I am a college student ,I come from Chinese.Now ,I want to learn Eglish , beause I love English ,I want to learn a foreign language,I even think i can very fluent spoken to a foreigner. so ,let's become good friends.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am a college student. I come am from Chinese  China. Now ,I want to learn English , because I love English. I want to learn a foreign language. I  even  think i can be very fluent  spoken   in speaking to a foreigner.

so, let's become good friends.
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COMMENT FROM ME::
Wow! You love English? I do love it too.
Work hard to improve♥~  ^_^

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am a college student. I come/am from China. Now I want to learn English , beause I love English. I want to learn the foreign language. I think I can speak very fluent English to a foreigner.
I think I am very fluent in English. I think I speak English very fluently.
So let's become good friends.
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hi laurel .........i like it also

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