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The first session The teacher asked me about my life,my friends,my family,my job and my country. I told him that I was born in Hunan province and moved Beijing 2009 and where are my family members living in.The province where I was born is different from Beijing.I told him that I hope my country will be free and creative and open in the coming 5 years.He asked me why I hope "open"."Is it closed?"He said.I told him that the country has the Great Wall for example driving Google.I also told him there was worse in the past 5 years.For example, the law give the government the most power and give the citizen the least right.The standpoint of my magazine and the order of Liren College were discussed.But my English is too poor to communicate.It is so sad. My teacher is pretty good.

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The first session

The teacher asked me about my life, my friends, my family, my job and my country. (when you use punctuation marks, you should add a space following them)
I told him that I was born in Hunan province and moved to Beijing in 2009 and where are my family members still living live in Hunan. The province where I was born is different from Beijing. I told him that I hope my country will be free,and creative and open in the coming 5 years. He asked me why I hope "open"."Is it closed?"He said.I told him that the country has the Great Fire Wall, for example,it drove Google out. I also told him things was worse in the past 5 years. For example, the law entrusts the government a great amount of power andbut the citizen only enjoy few right. The standpoints of my magazine and the order of Liren College were discussed.But my English is too poor to articulatedcommunicate. It is so sad.
My teacher is pretty good.

(I recommend that you shall fully develop one point next time rather than arrange too many things without further illuminating. Best wishes!)

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The first session

The teacher asked me about my life,my friends,my family,my job and my country.
I told him that I was born in Hunan province where my family members are living in and moved to Beijing in 2009.The province where I was born is different from Beijing.I told him that I hope my country would be free, creative and open in the coming 5 years.He asked me why I hope it to be "open"."Is it closed?"He said.I told him that the country has the Great Fire Wall, for example, and it drives Google out.I also told him it was worse in the past 5 years.For instance, the law gives the government the most power and gives the citizen the least rights.The standpoint of my magazine and the order of Liren College were also discussed. However, my English is too poor to communicate.It is so sad.
My teacher is pretty good.

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