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Homesick Spring festival is coming, I received a call from my mother this moring, she asked me to go home in spring festival. I fell sad, because my home far away from here and the holiday is only one week, so I decided not go home though I am very miss my mother.I wish my family everything goes well. What I can do is hard work.

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Homesick

Spring festival is coming, I received a call from my mother this moring, she asked me to go home in spring festival. I fell felt sad, because my home is far away from here and the holiday is only one week, so I decided not go home though I am very really miss my mother. I wish my family everything goes is well. What All I can do is hard to work hard [you can add " for them "].
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Homesick,the same with you.But,I'm going to go home.

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