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1/5/2015 I climbed out from the skylight onto the rooftop, sitting on the edge of the roof, staring into the night sky. I swung my bare legs in the air. The air was still and sky was clear. Tons of stars hung on the sky and smiled back to me. I then leaned on the slightly slanted rooftop. A small steak of light was passing the night sky and then disappeared from the horizon in a second.

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1/5/2015

I climbed out from the skylight onto the rooftop,. Sitting on the edge of the roof staring into the night sky, I swung my bare legs in the air. The air was still and sky was clear. Tons of stars hung on the sky and smiled back to me. I then leaned on the slightly slanted rooftop. A small streak of light was passing passed through the night sky and then immediately disappeared from the horizon in a second.

 

 

This is very beautiful! You painted such a lovely clear picture!

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