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Korea It was the very first trip.Because I have never left China and I really want to learn something new which is I can't learn it from school. After a three-hour flight,I finally arrived Korea.I was sleepy and starving because of the flight.I didn't sleep on the plane since I don't want to miss the sun rise in Korea and as I wish I watched.It was incredible and I thought that is God's creation.How amazing it is? I spent 5 days in Korea.Korean are so nice and police.I really admire their conscious of eviromental protection.The air is really fresh.Hopefully I will be there in winter after all I am a child who is born and raise in Hong Kong.

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Korea
It was the very first trip.Because I have never left China and I really want to learn something new which is I can't learn it from at school.
After a three-hour flight,I finally arrived in Korea. I was sleepy and starving because of the flight.I didn't sleep on the plane since I don't didn't want to miss the sunrise in Korea. (this is enough, because it means, that you watched the sunrise) and as I wish I watched. It was incredible and I thought, that is God's creation. How amazing it is?
I spent 5 days in Korea. Korean people are so nice and policete.I really admire their consciousness of eviromental protection. The air is really fresh. Hopefully I will be there in winter after all I am a child who is born and raised in Hong Kong.

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Korea
It was the very first trip.Because I have never left China and I really want to learn something new which is I can't learn it from at school.
After a three-hour flight,I finally arrived in Korea. I was sleepy and starving because of the flight.I didn't sleep on the plane since I don't didn't want to miss the sunrise in Korea. (this is enough, because it means, that you watched the sunrise) and as I wish I watched. It was incredible and I thought, that is God's creation. How amazing it is?
I spent 5 days in Korea. Korean people are so nice and polite.I really admire their consciousness of eviromental protection. The air is really fresh. Hopefully I will be there in winter after all I am a child who is born and raised in Hong Kong.
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Wow! That's really nice! I also want to go to South Korea but for me it would be a 12-hour flight since I live in the other side of the world (Brazil). Hong Kong is in my list of places to go too. Thank you for sharing your experience and hope your next trip be like the last one. Have a good day :-)

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