Second page of 2015.

If we imagine, that life - it is a large Library, and a year - it is only one Book...then we begin the our acquaintance with a New Story now. [If we compare life to a library, and each book then represents a year, then we have just started a new book.]
We are not just readers.
At the same time - we are the readers, the co-authors and the authors of this Story.
[... we are the readers, writers and co-editors ..  ?]
Today, is January 2nd, 2015. [Today is the second of January 2015]
Today, would be the second page of the Story with the title - "2015".
I think, that in many respects, depends on us, what will be this Story. [the story depends on us.]

It is important to understand, that the Story of the Year, the page of each new day - it is not incomprehensible inevitability.
It is important to see in themselves a creative beginnings.

I hope, that this Story with the name of "2015" - will be better than the previous story "2014".
I hope, that we will find enough strength of creativity, kindness, patience, and belief in a better future - in order to write the Story of this New Year - as one of the best.
Let's create peace.
Let's create a world in which will want to live, and where will want to come back, closing eyes. [?]

Happy New Story 2015!

Ellen.

Ellen, is the comma (,) your favourite punctuation?   :)

Den

Second page of 2015.

If we imagine, that life - it is a large library, and a year - (,) it is only one Book...then we (can) begin the acquaintance with a New Story now.
We are not just readers.  (, but)
at the same time - (,) we are (also) the readers, the co-authors and the authors of this Story.

Today, is January 2nd, 2015.
Today, the second page of the Story with the title - "2015".
I think, that in many respects, depends on us, what will be this Story. (this story will depend on us)

It is important to understand, that the Story of the Year, the page of each new day - it is not incomprehensible inevitability.
It is important to see in themselves a creative beginnings.

I hope, that this Story with the name of "2015" - will (be) better than the previous "2014".
I hope, that we will find enough strength of creative (ity) , kindness, patience, and belief in a better (world) - in order to write the Story of this New Year - as one of the best.
Let's create peace.
Let's create a world in which (we) will want to live, and where (we) will want to come back, closing (when we close our) eyes.

Happy New Story 2015!

Ellen.

Try more commas and less dashes. Хорошо