Introducing myself ( A student from Hong Kong)
Hello! I am from Hong Kong and I would like to improve my English level. To enter university, you must have good results on English and as for careers, you have to have fluent English to secure a job.
My competitors are too great in English. They all study in schools which require expensive fees and those students' English have been as fluent as native speakers. Therefore I hope you guys can kindly correct my composition because I realise that I can hardly write something good even in my mother language.
My writing is terrible
Btw my name is Andy
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Introducing myself ( A student from Hong Kong)
Hello Andy. Your writing is not terrible. Let's see if this helps:
Hello! I am from Hong Kong and I would like to improve my English level. To enter a university, you must have good results on in English and, as for a career s, you have to have be fluent in English to secure a job.
My competitors are too great superior in English. They all study in schools which require have expensive fees and those students' English have been is as fluent as native speakers. Therefore, I hope you guys can kindly correct my composition because I realise (in America:"realize") that I can hardly write something good well even in my mother native language.
My writing is terrible
Btw my name is Andy
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Your writing is pretty good!
You don't need an expensive school to learn English wekk necessarily :)
I know many people who learn from watching tv and chatting with native speakers.
You can give yourself a good environment to learn English no matter where you live
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