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Interview This is a writing I made to practice for the exam I will do on January. Hope you help me to improve my redaction style. - Fancy yourself as an interviewer? I find my-self very curious and I love to hear about somebodys live. If I had the opportunity I would interview my grandmother. She is my fathers mother. She is an independent woman, she is also elegant, imaginativa and so witty that you can't stop laugthing. She is a tough person, down-to-earth since she was a child. With 9 years old she stared to work as a maid because her parents would not able to take care of her. So she worked in someones house and also she lived there. She found a way to work and spent time to learn how to be a fashion designer. To understand her it is important to add that she was born in the middle of a civil war. Because of all I said I would like to introduce her to everyone by an interview. I would ask her what leaded her to try to lear another profession. What did it took to pass this situation. Also I would ask if she thinks that anybody could do it, and what advice would she give to somebody that is living a similar situation.

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Interview

This is a writing I made to practice for the exam I will do on in January. Hope you help me to improve my redaction style.

- Fancy yourself as an interviewer?
I find myself to be very curious and I love to hear about somebody's life. If I had the opportunity I would interview my Grandmother. She is my father's mother. She is an independent woman, she is also elegant, imaginative and so witty that you can't stop laughing.

She is a tough person and has been down-to-earth since she was a child. With At 9 years old, she stared to work as a maid because her parents would were not able to take care of her, So she worked in someones house and also she lived there.

She found a way to work and to spend time to learn how to be a fashion designer. To understand her it is also important to add that she was born in the middle of a Civil War.

Because of all After everything I have said I would like to introduce her to everyone by through an interview. I would ask her what leaded led her to try to learn another profession, what did it took to pass this situation. I would also ask her if she thinks that anybody could do it and what advice would she give to somebody that is living a similar situation.

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Well written, good job!

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