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I cannot believe that we are in 2015 now. It feels like just yesterday I was laying in my bed and looking at my Nesquik calendar, and that was in 2001. I was such little girl with so many hopes and dreams. And what do I see when I look at myself now? I see a woman with so many hopes and dreams, but maybe now I have become self-reliant and know what I really want to do.
I wish everyone a happy and purposeful New Year, and may your dreams come true. Happy New Year, guys.
Very good, Nasya. Good luck to you in 2015.
2015!!!
Wow, we are in 2015 now! I cannot believe it:) I feel like it was It seems just yesterday that I was lying lay (you lay eggs) in my bed and looking at the calendar with a painted picture of Nesquik and - it was in 2001. I was so such a little girl with so many hopes and plans which/that I wanted to implement. And what do I see now when I look at myself?) I still see a girl with so many hopes and plans which/that I intend to implement :D, but just maybe now I have become more self reliant, and know better that what I really want to do. I want to wish everyone to be happiness, and hope you can find purposeful in the new year and - may your dreams come true:) Happy New Year, guys!
2015!!!
Wow, we are in 2015 now! I cannot believe it. :) I feel like it was just yesterday that I lay in my bed and looked at the calendar with a painted Nesquik [?] and it was in 2001. I was so such a little girl with so many hopes and plans which I wanted to implement. And what I see now when I look at myself? ) I see a girl with so many hopes and plans which I intend to implement. :D, just Maybe now I have become self reliant and know have a better idea of wthat I really want to do. I want to wish everyone to be happy and purposeful in the new year and that your dreams come true. :) Happy New Year, guys!
Nasya, I've tried to keep changes to a minimum.
"Painted Nesquick" - I remember Nesquick as a a flavoured drink with milk. Is that what you meant? 'Painted' usually refers to an object like "A painted table".
A calendar would usually have pictures or photos or drawings.
You could have used "happen" rather than "implement".
Why do you not wish everyone a Happy New Year?
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2015!!!
Wow, we are in 2015 now! I cannot believe it:) I feel like it was just yesterday that I laid in my bed and looked at the calendar with a painted Nesquik and it was in 2001. I was a so little girl with so many hopes and plans which that I wanted to implement. And What do I see now when I look at myself?I see a girl with so many hopes and plans which I intend to implement :D, just Maybe, now I can become self-reliant and know what better that I really want to do. I want to wish everyone to be happiness and purposeful in the new year and that your dreams come true:)Happy New Year, guys!
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