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Are These What We want? My last week of training, I worked in the ICU. Only very sick patients who needed to be carefully monitored would be admitted to ICU. Most of them are caused by car accidents or the patient who just took an operation has some complications. When I was there, coincidently, almost every morning, we would see one or two new patients admitted the previous night because of traffic accidents. Those patients often looked scary with their wounded body. The first morning I went to this new ward, I saw a young man lying on the bed, and his head was swollen. He had a deformed and ashen face. Yes, ashen face, that’s the new term I have just learned. It came into my mind at the time. His story was he drove a motorcycle bumping on a car. Very soon, his heart stopped running in that morning, and we did CPR on him. When I took the doctor's place to press on his chest with my hands, I could tell there had already had no life signs in him. As the policy in any resuscitation goes, we can only give up in 30 minutes after the Cardiac arrest. Following the declaration of the death to the family, the desperate mother cried in... On Friday, my last day in ICU, a 54 years old man was newly admitted also the night before. It was said his case was a tricycle crashed him down, and then crossed over the lower part of his body. He was lying in bloody linen, and he has already been in coma with a ventilator helping him breath. We wanted to put him in clean, but the order was we couldn't move his body any a little. He had a severe inner bleeding, and it has caused the over swelling of his two thighs. No access to his lower cavalla vein to block the bleeding, it means no operation that could be done on him at the time. The doctor who was in charge of him told me: now we much left him to his God. Instantly, we blamed all these to their bad lucks. I knew there was something else wrong, and I supposed everybody else there knew that. However, most time, we just don’t want to be aware of the truth. When one of my friends, a current traffic policeman, who deals with traffic accidents everyday as he described his job to us, somewhat covered his car number during one trip, he ‘flied’ us back by his car, instead of driving us back. When the evenings fall, people tend to not obey the traffic rules, I guess. On another aspect, as the living standard has dramatically improved, it has become a fashion to have a driving license, since it means you have a car or you will soon have one. In old stereotype, only the rich can own a car, and it used to be a symbol of status. But I am shocked by the way most people would like to do—go a backdoor to get a driving license as soon as possible. So, I think we would expect more and more “road killers”. Everyone can easier to learn this. It won’t be surprised to work in hospital to see as many as tragedies caused by traffic accidents.

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On Another aspect is that, as the living standards have dramatically improved, it has become a fashionable to have a driving license, since it means you have a car or you will soon have one. In old stereotypes, only the rich can own a car, and it can be used to be a symbol of status. But I am shocked by the way most people would like to do—go to a "backdoor" to get a driving license as soon as possible, even if it's illigal.

So, I think we can would expect more and more “road killers”. Everyone can easier to learn this. It won’t wouldn't be surprising, if you worked in hospital, to see more as many as tragedies caused by traffic accidents.

 

Very good! I'm impressed.
-I've never ever heard the word "ahsen" before, just be aware that's it's not common
-To "give up" is to admit defeat. I would say "we have to do it for thirty minutes before being allowed to stop trying"
-It's more common to hear it referred to as a heart attack

 

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Are These Is This What We Want?

During my last week of training, I worked in the ICU. Only very sick patients who needed to be carefully monitored would be admitted to the ICU. Most of them had been in are caused by car accidents, but there were others who had had operations which went (slightly) wrong which lead to (some) complications. or the patient who just took an operation has some complications.

When I was there, coincidently, almost every morning, we would see one or two new patients who had been admitted the previous night because of traffic accidents. Those patients often looked scary with their wounded bodies. The first morning, when I went to this new ward, I saw a young man lying on the bed, and his head was swollen. He had a deformed and ashen* face. Yes, an ashen face, that’s the new term I have just learned. It came into my mind at the time.

His story was that he had driven a motorcycle and had then bumped into on a car. Very soon, his heart stopped beating running in that morning, and we did CPR on him (and we had to perform CPR). When I took the doctor's place to press on his chest with my hands, I could tell that he there had already had no life signs of life in him. As the policy in any resuscitation goes, we can only give up* in 30 minutes after the Cardiac Arrest*. Following the declaration of the death to the family, the desperate mother cried in...

On Friday, my last day in the ICU, a 54 years old man had also been was newly admitted also the night before. It was said his case was a tricycle had run crashed him over down, and then driven crossed over the lower part of his body. He was lying in bloody linen, and he had already been in coma with a ventilator helping him breath. We wanted to put him in clean sheets, but the order was that we couldn't move his body at all any a little. He had a severe inner bleeding, and it has caused the over swelling of his two thighs. With no access to his lower cavalla vein to block the bleeding, it meant that no operation that could be done on him at the time. The doctor who was in charge of him told me "now we must leave much left him to his God.

Instantly, we blamed all these accidents to their bad lucks. I knew there was something else wrong, and I supposed everybody else there knew that too. However, most of the time, we just don’t want to be aware of the truth.

When one of my friends, a current traffic policeman, who deals with traffic accidents everyday as he described his job to us, somewhat covered his car registration plate number during one trip, he ‘flied’ us back by his car, instead of driving us back. When the evenings fall, people tend to not obey the traffic rules, I guess.

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