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formal report A reporter,whom works for BBC, was interviewed by a journalist about putting things into the cloud.First,he stated that people might share pictures,videos and documents on internet with companies such as Facebook,Twitter,Instagram,Apple and so on.However, he affirmed that there are some drawback.For example,sometimes there is no privacy.Although it exists the passwords to put into the cloud,there are many hackers who try to enter into the cloud.Consequently,they share private things on internet and for this reason,are seen by the whole world.Many celebrities are been victims by this drawback,like Rihanna and Jennifer Lopez who have been seen completely nude on internet.Because of hackers,whom are the most expert in computer,these pictures have been published/These pictures have been published by hackers whom are the most expert in computer.Hackers are able to enter illegally in systems protected by passwords.The police are trying to find them,but it is not too easy.The interviewee believes that people have to be sharp and careful to put important things into the cloud,and also thinking twice about what to put.Because we do not have any control on these websites owned by big corporations.He said that some companies are trying to improve the secure system with 'two-factor authentification.This one requires two code,one on internet and another on own mobile phone which are sent to users.

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A reporter, who works for BBC, was interviewed by a journalist about putting things onto the cloud. First,he stated that people might share pictures, videos and documents on the internet with companies such as Facebook, Twitter, Instagram, Apple and so on. However, he affirmed that there are some drawbacks. For example, sometimes there is no privacy. Although passwords exist for data put on the cloud, there are many hackers who try to break into the cloud. Consequently, they share private things on the internet for the whole world to see. Many celebrities are been victims of this issue, like Rihanna and Jennifer Lopez who have been seen completely nude on the internet. These pictures have been published by hackers who are some of the greatest computer experts. Hackers are able to illegally enter password-protected systems. The police try to catch them, but it is not easy. The interviewee believes that people have to be sharp and careful when they put important things into the cloud, and should think twice about what they put onto the cloud because we do not have any control on websites owned by big corporations. He said that some companies are trying to improve their security system with "two-factor authentification" which requires two code, one on the internet and another on own mobile phone which are sent to users.

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