My Hobby

Different people have different hobbies.  For example, someone likes reading, someone likes swimming, and someone likes collecting and so on. [1] 
I used to read books and draw pictures because, by reading books, I could learn many funny things.  But now I don't like it.  I can only learn from books.  I couldn't get knowledge from others.  I need a change.  Traveling is my favorite hobby now.  But I can't go traveling a lot.  I can visit many different places of interest by traveling.  I can learn a lot about people, places and history.  It's very interesting.  What is your hobby?

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[1] When talking about people in general, we are more likely to say "some people" than "someone".  For example:

"Some people like reading, some people like swimming, some people like collecting, and so on."

In fact, we would often omit the repeated 'people', and write:

"Some people like reading, some like swimming, some like collecting, and so on."

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Great job!  There were virtually no errors.  However, spacing is very important when writing English.  Please take note of all the spaces which I have added.