"An early morning bath"
Today I woke up early in the morning , It was almost 5 AM . The sky was vague . I could not see the sky clearly because there was a thick layer of fog between my eyes and sky . I went to the bathroom and starting to fill the bucket from water and when the bucket was fully loaded . I have streamed it on myself . I was wobbling and simultaneously shouting because the water was very cold and thereupon I have taken my towel and dried up myself .
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"An early morning bath"
Today I woke up early in the morning , it was almost 5 AM . The sky was vague overcast. I could not see the sky clearly because there was a thick layer of fog between my eyes and the sky . I went to the bathroom and started to fill a bucket with water and when the bucket was fully loaded . I have streamed it onto myself . I was wobbling and simultaneously shouting because the water was very cold and immediately I took my towel and dried myself up .
* "thereupon" is correct, however is very formal so not in line with the rest of the text
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