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My Resolutions for 2015
I would like to say that making our dreams a reality is easy, but no; we need patience and confindence. If we want to achieve our goals we need to believe in ourselves. I have many plans for 2015 because 2014 was not my best year. I had many problems, I did bad things, and I hurt people. Now I feel sorry because if I want to have a good life I should be a good person and not hurt people.
2015 is my year to start helping people and being happy all the time, although some people think we will never be happy or have a good life. That makes me feel really motivated to continue, because I know I will. I will do things to help people, and share more with my family. I will improve my English in 2015, and I want to travel more. I want to help people to be happy.
If we want to help change the world, the first thing to do is to be happy, and then everyone will to be happy like you.
I want to share this picture with you. I live in a city in and seeing these views of the countryside makes me happy.
First person plural is better than second person when we write.
My resolutions for 2015
I would like to say that to do a dream is easy but NO!! you need to go with patience and with confindence. if you want to achieve your goals you need to believe in yourself. I have a lot of plans for 2015 because 2014 was not the best year. I had many problems and I did bad things and I hurted people. Now I feel really sorry because if you want to have a good life you should to be a good person and not hurts people. 2015 is my year. I started to help the people in my last months and be happy all the time although some people are thinking you never will be happy and you never will be to have a good life.That makes me feel really motivated to continue because I know I will. I will do a lot things to help more people and share more with my family. I will improve my English for 2015 and I want to travel more. I want to help people to be happy.
If you want to help for change the world the first thing you should to do is be happy and then all people will to be happy like you.
I want to share this picture with you. I was in a city of my country and I feel really happy to see this views.
Thanks a lot.
**feliz año nuevo!!!**
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