A friend forever

The moment i saw here her, i knew she  is  will be my forever friend [or it could be " friend forever "]. We two  The two of us [using the phrase " The two of us " makes the sentence more appropriate] study at the same college. We share the same room, the same hobby, the same friends, and we always create happiness for each other. I enjoy those moments.

We can feel that we need the each other and we understand how to cherish that kind of friendship. But things seem to chage now. Although i know i miss her, i don't want to call her. But in my heart, i prefer  am hoping to receive a call from her. I am waiting for that surprise.

Maybe life changes something--- maybe after graduation, probably we need to change something, or forget something so as to be a good daughter or a good girlfriend. But i still want to tell you Amy,  we   you will always be my best friend.

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COMMENT FROM ME::
I hope you and your best friend will both find a way to fix your friendship.
^_^