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a short article discribing a chart From the chart we can see that there is smaller proportion of aged people living in poverty than the proportion of poor people from family structures in younger adults. There is 6% of single elderly people and 4% of elderly couples living in poverty. As for younger adults, single adults are more likely to live in poverty comparing with couples. For example, 19% of people from single adults without children were living in poverty and 21% of sole parents were in the same situation. While for the couples without children, the percentage is 7%, and 12% for the couples with children. Also, we can see that people from the families with children has higher poor level than those from the families without children. The average proportion for all household living in poverty is 11%. According to the chart, the proportion of poor aged people is below this position, while the percentage of most of younger adults living in poverty is higher than the average level. We can conclude that old people lived a better life in Australia in 1999.

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A short article discribing a chart

From the chart we can see that there is smaller proportion of aged people living in poverty than the proportion of poor people from family structures in younger adults. There is 6% Six percent (6%) [in reports we always write the numerals in full if they begin a sentence. "there is" is not required] of single elderly people and 4% of elderly couples living in poverty.

As for younger adults, single adults are more likely to live in poverty compared with couples. For example, 19% of people from single adults without children were living in poverty and 21% of sole parents were in the same situation. While for the couples without children, the percentage is 7%, and 12% for the couples with children. Also, we can see that people from the families with children have higher poor levels of poverty than those from the families without children.

The average proportion for of all households living in poverty is 11%. According to the chart, the proportion of poor aged people is below this position, while the percentage of most of younger adults living in poverty is higher than the average level. We can conclude that old people lived a better life in Australia in 1999.

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