Free Public Transport

Hello,
I wrote a passage about chancing  making public transportation to free of charge.
I'd be grateful if there was someone on here who could check my entry and correct the mistakes that I might have made. And of course receiving leave your opinion about my entry.
Thank you all in advance.

My entry:
In my view public transportation should be free of charge.
To begin with, citzens pay a lot of tax. 
They pay almost for any service they receive: electiricity, water, health insurance and so on.
But on the other hand, the citizens aren't given anything for free back, for instance - a bonus for paying all your bills on time.
Thereby, there's a feeling among many citizens, of being "used" by the government.
They go to work, pay the bills, pay for anything they need - and they don't really get anything for free.
To sum it up, exempting the public from paying for public transporation fare may encourage and spur the last to feel  help people to feel better with  about the authorities, which, in turn, may even improve the interaction between both sides.

Well done. It was just the last sentence which was completely confusing so I changed it a little bit to make it easier to understand.

Public Transportation With No Cost

In my view, public transportation should be free of charge (for users). To begin with, citizens pay a lot of money to the rule system/government/authorities.
They almost pay almost for any every service they receive: electiricity, water, health insurance and so on.
But on the other hand, the citizens aren't given anything back for free back, for instance - a bonus for paying all your bills on time.
Therefore, there's a feeling among many citizens of being "used" by the government.
They go to work, pay the bills, pay for everything they need - and they don't really get anything for free.
To sum it up, exempting the public from paying for public transporation fares may encourage and spur the last them to feel better with about the authorities, which in turn, may even improve the interaction between both the two sides.