Ielts Writing

Tiltle :Some people say that the best way to solve traffic congestions in cities is to provide free public transportation, 24 hours a day, 7 days a week.  To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Traffic Trafiic jams happens more and more frequently in some cities and it causes has an inconvenient effect (or use: creates an inconvenience) on people's daily life.  Some people say that the best way to solve this problem is that the government needs to provide free public transportation for 24 hours a day, 7 days a week.  Personally speaking, I don not agree with that.

On the surface, to provide all-day public transportation can help to alleviate the situation.  To start, with, it is able to afford public transport transportation during every minute in the cities,so it would benefit benifit some people who go out in at unusual times.  For example, the closing time of some workers can become flexiable more flexible and these people they can also take buses, though the time is late, instead of driving their own cars.  ,it can This would decrease the number of cars which are on road at these times.

However, this possibility still has some potential shortages shortfalls, (or use: shortcomings, downsides, drawbacks) which we need to research more deeply. Traffic congestions always happens during the rush time hour, but the service are would still run in the during other times.  It is This means that the transport systerm still needs a lot of power resources and labor forces to maintain the extra working time of transport systerm.  Compared with the cost, the return makes the project unworthy(might use: unprofitable, undesirable), wasting our public resources and causing more problems in the future.

All in all, in my view, the best way to deal with traffic congestions is to instill environmental values to citizens.  People should go out advoiding and avoid the rush time hour., and if it If possiable, riding bikes or walking are better choices, when their time is available,  and because it benefits people's health as well.  Government also need to perfect traffic management systerms that combines the different factors—the transportation, human beings, and the infrastructure—helping them to work with each other together completely and efficiently.

**  Hopefully this helps!  Your writing and ability to convey your thoughts is very good!  One note that I would add about punctuation to help you in the future: We usually add one space after a comma, but two spaces after the end of a sentence.  So, for example, you can see that after each period (.) or exclamation mark (!) in these sentences, I've added 2 spaces before beginning the next sentence.  Otherwise, keep up the great work!

`