Life is surbtraction

Life is subtraction. Why do i say that? beacause when i was a little girl, my parents told me that if you want to be somebody,you must study very hard. They asked me what should i done was right.when i was in primary school in grade one,i studyed very hard.  I got 94 out of 100 points(100 points is full marks)on a final exam,it was the first in the class at that term. then i ran home with a geart pleasure ,i took the examination paper to my father.  He said: you didn't get 100 points,you still need to continue to work hard. i felt sad when he said that without any enconragement. i thought no matter how i tried, it was too difficult to reach 100 points.  Then i started to neglect my  studies and never was the first in the class anymore.
When i grow up,i realized the important of encouragement for a child.  My parents have been telling me what I should do in every step of my life.  As an aodolescent was afraid of the word without independent.i had to protect myself and closed myself from the world to feel safe.
Life became better when i worked for a few years later, i began to think and understand what i really wanted. My inner self became clear.i started to think about what i really like and about what my dreams are. life becomes more clear.i started to surbtract what my parents gave me when i was little.i begin to pursue my own happiness until now. i know I'm only beginning. 

You are a very smart person, my friend!  I like your philosophy!  I hope these corrections will help you!  if you have any questions please feel free to ask. :)  Justin