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Why don’t we celebrate Christmas?
My friend from the States has decorated his house for the coming of the Christmas on next Thursday. Today when we talked on line, he showed me around his living room. There is a beautiful Christmas tree hanging with small gifts and colorful lights hanging from it in the corner. On the table, there are several Santa Clause’ faces mugs shaped like Santa's face. Yes There is also a Santa Clause standing in the room on the other side of the opposite corner of the room. When my friend pressed somewhere on it, the Santa Clause started twisting his waist hips and dancing. “How nice it is!” I gave him my comments I commented. My friend said. “Yes, my wife loves it!”
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sorry, i only have a bit of time so i just did the first paragraph. not all of the changes are because it was incorrect, but i think this way sounds more natural. i'm american so i've looked at this from an "american english" view.
blue areas are "optional" you can say them or leave them out.
red typing is my additions/changes.
most people i know just say "santa".
great job overall! keep it up!
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