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My study At the moment I study business administration in the 7th semester. The core subject was four semester and in the fifth semester I had a intern at an automotive manufacturer. My deepenings are controlling and finance. My bachelor thesis I write at the moment about the topic "corporate finance - the influences of the financial crisis to mid-sized companies". My next goal is to study in a master programme or start to work at a small business to gain experiences on the job. When I will start to work, maybe I catch up a MBA after two years. Thanks.

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** Nice job overall. I made some changes, but your english is very good.

My study

At the moment I am studying business administration in my 7th semester of school. The core subject was four semesters long and in the fifth semester I had to complete a internship at an automotive manufacturer. My interests are controlling and finance. My bachelor thesis I write at the moment about The topic of the thesis I am writing now is titled "Corporate Finance - The Influences of the Financial Crisis to Mid-sized Companies". My next goal is to study in a masters program or start to work at a small business to gain experience on the job.

I may start my MBA program after I have  a couple years of work experiance.
When I will start to work, maybe I catch up a MBA after two years.

Thanks,.
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(for some things, I wasn't really sure what you were trying to say so I did my best guessing with the corrections).

At the moment, I am studying business administration and am in my 7th semester. I studied my core subject in my fourth semester, and in my 5th semester, I interned at an automotive manufacturer. My interest is in controlling and finance. I am writing my bachelor thesis at the moment about corporate finance and the influence of the financial crisis on mid-sized companies. My next goal is to study in a masters program or to start working at a small business to gain on-the-job experience.

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