Yellow Submarine in New York

"I went straight to the kitchen, get got (because you have started the paragraph in the past you have to keep it this way throughout) myself a glass and a (article missing) bottle of "J'n'B" and rose (you may consider using a different verb such as walked, ran, wandered, strolled - depending on the mood of the situation) up upstairs to the TV-room. There I placed the first one tape to the video recorder and started to watch Beatles "Yellow Submarine" which was on the tape (this sentence has many added words which do not need to be there - you may want to right something along the lines of: Once I got upstairs, I grabbed the first tape on the shelf and put/inserted it into the video recorder; it was labeled: "Yellow Submarine" by the Beatles).
However I couldn't stand this syrup  on a screen for a long time. (unsure what you mean by this). Too big amount of Love exuding from the Yellow Submarine suddenly made this film for me unbearably disgusting and I angrily turned off TV. "Love! Love!" - I mimicked I. "What a big deal to have millions, bullshit about love, fenced off from this world with love---10% from income giving for the charity...Love...Neither the citizens of West Bronx, not even I, with my 21 thousand of franks, cannot allow this Love. I fucked your love, fucking bigots, the Beatles!". And As I finished my bottle I felt fell (wrong tense of the verb to fall) asleep." (this last section has lost its meaning as it sounds like you rushed through it)
Ed. Limonow "East Side - West Side"