my first dream is Blizard  join a company.

so that English studying. XD

second dream is my game company build.
every day to take notes my idea. and C++ programing is studying(?)
sometime GTA , call of duty , creating the surpass game :-)
so many 노력has need.

My first dream is to join a company like Blizzard(or join a company.
So that is why I am studying English. XD

My second dream is to build my game company.
Every day I take notes on my ideas. And I study C++ programing.
Sometimes I play GTA, or call of duty, to create the surpassing game :-)
so many 노력has need. I will need much effort.

Word order is very important in English! If you practice that, you'll be in good shape!