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NOTE: Please, help me to correct my mistakes Write an essay, requeriments: (120-250 words), formal language and use linkers NOTE: Please, help me to correct my mistakes The internet is questioned Nowadays, the Internet provides a lot information of different kind of topics in a way fast and accessible for all. In fact, people are searching more information on the internet than in the books. The news and information provided by the Internet, help people to be more updated about worldwide events. The books are less used, because they are not so illustrative like the contents shown on the internet and although some books describes how to do things or try to transmit an idea, books never will be so dynamic like the material on the internet which explains their content through videos or massive images. However, a lot of material on the internet is not so reliable, because exists people who likes invent news or do jokes, that is why, there are persons which prefer less dynamic information but high reliable. Also, the material on internet is more informal than in the books and these ones provides you a grand content of formal words that can improve your vocabulary. On balance, I believe that the internet provides interesting material, but you need to find it in a reliable website. The users should be more responsable to upload reliable content for improve our internet service, which is the book of the future.

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The internet is questioned 


Nowadays, the Internet provides a lot of information on different kinds of topics in a way that is fast and accessible for all. In fact, people are searching for more information on the internet than in the from books.

The news and information provided by the Internet helps people to be become more updated about worldwide events. Books are less used, because they are not so as illustrative like as the contents shown on the internet and although some books describes how to do things or try to transmit an idea, books never will be so will never be as dynamic like as the materials on the internet, which explains their content through videos or massive images.

However, a lot of materials on the internet are not so reliable, because exists of people who likes to invent news or do jokes, that is why, there are persons which people who prefer less dynamic information but high reliable (less dynamic but more reliable information from books). Also, the materials on internet is are more informal than in the books and these ones provides you a grand content of formal words that can improve your vocabulary. (Also, books contains a wide range of vocabularies that can help improve your language skills, compared to the internet, where the language used is more informal.)

On balance, I believe that the internet provides interesting material, but you need to find it in a look for reliable websites (and sources). The users should be more responsible to upload reliable content for improve our internet service, which is the book of the future. (Internet users should be more responsible when uploading contents to create a reliable online community, which is the book of the future.)

 

 

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