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Painter Mr Thomas are a painter who lived two floor.he had a curling beard,the round faring eyes were a glasses.his smile every charming,but Thomas was a failure in art.he had wielded the brush twenty years,it had been painted a maser-piece.he alway drank gin excess,and had been talked the coming master-piece.

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Painter

Mr Thomas are is (singular!) a painter who lived/lives (past tense or present tense? Is he dead?) two on the second floor. He had/has a curling beard, the round faring staring/failing? eyes, and wears were a glasses. His smile is very every charming, but Thomas he was/is a failure in art, because although he had/has wielded/been wielding the brush for twenty years, it he had been never painted a masterpiece. He always drank gin to excess, and had been talked always spoke of the coming masterpiece.

 

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The Painter

Mr. Thomas is a painter who lives on the two floor second floor . He has a curly beard, round eyes, and he wears glasses. Although his smile every was charming, Mr. Thomas was a failure in art. He had wielded the brush for twenty years and had been painting a masterpiece in which he never seemed to finish. He always drank gin in excessand would always talk about finishing his masterpiece.




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