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Practice Hi everybody i like English i also like foreigner. Of cause I like Chinese very much.but i think foreign films and music is better than china is.do not means Chinese film so bad. whatever. I had a dream when i was a child to become a singer but now i know that can not be true.just a joke and sometimes i felt a little bit sorrow let me change another theme.i m lived bejing four years my work place near by Canada embassy My job so boring so i have many time to learn English sounds good is not it? sometimes i watched films to killing the time and learning English.i m so stupid spent an hour to written this i can not write any more so tried never mind i m go to sleeping now.many thanks to you guys

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Hello maixu!

Here's my take on your writing. These are informal corrections and there are a few suggestions. If you'd ever like to book a session, I could explain what I did in more detail.

 

Hi everybody!

I like the English language but I also like foreign languages. Of course, I like Chinese very much but I think foreign films and music are better than Chinese media. I do not mean Chinese film is bad. Whatever.

I dreamed of becoming a singer when I was a child but now I know that that can not come true. Just a joke- however, sometimes I feel a little bit of sorrow.
let me change the subject. I have lived in Bejing for four years. My workplace is near the Canadian embassy. My job so boring.
So I have a lot of time to learn English. It sounds good isn’t it? Sometimes I watch films to kill the time and learn English. I’m so stupid, (I don't agree!) I spent an hour writing this. I cannot write any more- so tired- I’m go to sleep now.

Many thanks to you guys.

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