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Dec.16th Our company belongs to our government. It is a perfectly safe job and good payment in a small city of China. We didn't need to pay water and electricity, even rents. If employers didn't be married, they could live in company's dormitory. However the dormitory was built in 1980s, old, ugly,and 2~3 people in a room. I live here because It is completely free of charge and very safe. My parents live in another city. Every weekend I back home and go to church together with my parents. I also have a sister, who is five years younger than me is still in college. And in the last sunday before Christmas, she will receive baptism. I'm glad of that. We also have a diesel engined regular minibus sent us to company on weekdays. This morning was too cold. The diesel was frozen and the minibus couldn't get started. We all late half an hour, but nobody blame us. My work today is changing electro-classification(?). How to say that? The electricity price of business and resident are different. If a people use resident price and he also want to sell something. I need change his record in system. I need change almost 30 people's. Not only business and resident, but also agriculture, industry and mixed. I hope I could write composition without the help of translator, one day. I must keep on writing. Good night and god with everybody.

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Dec.16th

Our company belongs to our government. It is a perfectly safe job and good payment in a small city of China. We  don't  need to pay water and electricity,  or even rent. If employees aren't married, they can live in the company's dormitory. However the dormitory was built in 1980s, so it is  old, ugly,and 2~3 people in a room. I live here because It is completely free of charge and very safe. My parents live in another city. Every weekend I  go back home and go to church together with my parents. I also have a sister, who is five years younger than me is still in college. And in the last sunday before Christmas, she will receive baptism. I'm glad of that.
We also have a diesel engine regular minibus sent us by the  company on weekdays. This morning was too cold. The diesel was frozen and the minibus couldn't get started. We  were all half an hour late, but nobody blame us. My work today is changing electro-classification(?). How to say that? The electricity price of businesses and residents are different. If a person uses resident price and he also wants to sell something,I need to  change his record in system. I need  to change almost 30 people's. Not only business and resident, but also agriculture, industry and mixed.
I hope I  will be able to write composition without the help of translator, one day. I must keep on writing. Good night and  God bless everybody.

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Dec.16th

Our company is state-owned enterprise. It is a perfect and stable job with good payment compared an average level of pay in a small city of China. We didn't need to pay utilities and even rents. If employers wouldn't be married, they could live in company's dormitory forever. However the dormitory was built in 1980s, it is old, ugly,and 2~3 people in a room. I live here, because it is completely free of charge and very safe to live in the dormitory. My parents live in another city. Every weekend I come back home and go to church together with my parents. I also have a sister, who is five years younger than me and is still in college. And on the last sunday before Christmas, she will receive baptism. I'm so glad to see that.
We also have a diesel powered regular minibus used for senting us to company on workdays. This morning was too cold. The diesel was frozen and the minibus couldn't get started. We are all late for half an hour, but nobody blamed us. Today, my work  was to chang electro-classification(? what's the meaning?). How to say that? The electricity price of business and resident are different. If a person use resident price, he also want to sell something. I need to change his record in system. I need to change almost 30 people's. Not only business and resident, but also agriculture, industry and mixed.
I hope I could write the composition without the help of translator in one day. I must keep on writing. Good night and god with everybody.

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You have written a really long composition,well done!

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