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When I was a child, the pollution was not very heavily,you could see the blue sky and flockes of birds.In the snow morning,you could hear their beautiful songs,if you put some grains on the snow ground, they would eat up them all quickly.According to the pollution gets worse with time, haze is often full of the air, seeing the blue sky and flockes of birds was a childhold’s memorry.But I was lucky today,because I saw flockes of birds flying in the pale sky,even not in the bule sky,they changed their lines now and then,to be a very beautiful scene.
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When I was a child, the pollution was not very heavy; you could see the blue sky and flocks of birds. In the snowy morning, you could hear their beautiful songs. If you put some grains on the snowy ground, they would eat them all up quickly. Apparently the pollution gets worse with time; the air is often full of haze. Seeing the blue sky and flocks of birds is a childhood memory. But I was lucky today, because I saw flocks of birds flying in the pale sky, not even in a blue sky. They changed their lines now and then, to become a very beautiful scene.
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