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Help with grammar Is this sentence correct? "One of my composition's paintings looks like I've been being on heavy drugs while I've been painting it." (below is a painting by Bryan Lewis Saunders)

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Help with grammar

Is this sentence correct?
"One of my composition's paintings looks like I've been being on heavy drugs while I've been painting it."

(below is a painting by Bryan Lewis Saunders)

 

Ofcourse there are other ways but this is a clearer version of your sentence. 

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Help with grammar

Is this sentence correct?
"One of my composition's paintings looks like I've been being on heavy drugs while I've been painting it."

(below is a painting by Bryan Lewis Saunders)

 

I wouldn't say you needed to include both "composition" and "painting", Anastasia.

Compare these alternatives:

"One of my composition's looks ...."

"One of my paintings looks ...."

"One of my composition's, a painting, looks ...."

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