dont like taking a train
i really find it annoying to take a trip by train. it can save money for my trip,but i have to spend a lot of time sitting in the train,sometimes even standing,cu'z the speed of the train is not so fast.secondly,everyone knows that most of the trains are not clean,which i am really not suited with.my shoes often by accident touch the sticky floor coated with spilled beer,bubble gum etc.that's really terrible!thirdly,people on trains always make too much noise.once i was on my way home by train,i just felt tired and wanna have a rest.but there were two guys sitting behind me ,they were talking loudly.i asked them to turn down their voice,but they should answered to me that "it's none of your fucking business".oh!shit!they misunderstanded what i meant,they thought i was asking what they are talking about.omg, i just wanna have a good sleep.the reason why i don't like taking a train is that the high price of goods.i just don't like it!
comparing to take a train,i would opt for the bus instead.the bus is more clean,no one smoking there,and it drives quickly!
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Poor guy , i have the same experience like you ,i am used to .
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thank you very much!
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There are a few things you can do to greatly improve this composition.
1. Use a capital letter at the beginning of each sentence.
2. Always capitalize the pronoun "I" even if it is not at the beginning of the sentence.
3. Put one space between words. Put two spaces after every end punctuation mark (period . question mark ? and exclamation point !)
4. Stop using wanna. It is not standard English. Some people use it in text messages and chat rooms, but you have written a composition, not a text message. My recommendation is to stop using "wanna" altogether if you haven't learned how to use "want to". It's very weak language with only limited use. When people use "wanna" in formal writing, they are judged negatively.
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