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Hi all. Hi all. It's past midnight where I live. I'm chilling in my room drinking a cup of hot cocoa. I put a roasted marshmallow on top of it. It's sweet and tastes great. Tomorrow was a day off and I don't have plans. It's gonna be a free and refreshing day for the first time in a while. Because tomorrow is a vote day for a snap election, I'm going vote for it when I get up, though. Campaign cars were annoying in the last two weeks. Come to think of it, something is wrong with my PC these days. It's not been working normally; it runs slowly and freezes sometimes. I'm practicing how to use ; and :. It will be handy if I learn proper use of them. I'm not familiar to PC stuff and I'm wondering if it can be fixed. I'd be troubled without a PC, but I don't want to buy a new one if possible. It's expensive ;( I can not afford it this month. I hope I have it fixed cheap. Doesn't it sound like I will fix my PC by myself?

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Hi all.

Hi all. It's past midnight where I live. I'm chilling in my room drinking a cup of hot cocoa. I've'put a roasted marshmallow on top of it. It's sweet and tastes great. Tomorrow was I've got a/the day off and I don't have any plans. It's gonna be a free and refreshing day for the first time in a while. However, because tomorrow is a vote election day here in Japan for a snap election, I'm going to vote for it when I get up, though.  The noise of the campaign cars were have been annoying me in over the last two/couple of weeks.

Come to think of it, something is wrong with my PC these days. It's not been working normally; it runs slowly and freezes sometimes. (By the way, I'm practicing how to use ; and :. It will would be handy if I could learn proper use of them how to use them properly). I'm not familiar to with PC stuff and I'm wondering if it can be fixed. I'd be troubled in trouble without a PC, but I don't want to buy a new one if possible. It's expensive ;( I can not cannot afford it this month. I hope I can have it fixed cheaply. Doesn't It doesn't sound seem like I will be able to fix my PC it by myself?.


Hi there! Nicely done, it's easy to understand what you wanted to say. I have to agree with you about those campaign cars - 本当にうるさいよ! One tip about your register, In writing you should try to be consistent. If you are going to use "gonna", use it everytime eg. "I'm gonna vote"; otherwise, great job!

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Hi all.

Hi all. It's past midnight where I live. I'm chilling in my room drinking a cup of hot cocoa. I put a roasted marshmallow on top of it. It's sweet and tastes great. Tomorrow was a I have the day off and I don't have plans. It's gonna be a free and refreshing day for the first time in a while. Because tomorrow is a vote day for a snap election, I'm going to vote for it when I get up, though. Campaign cars were annoying in the last two weeks.

Come to think of it, something is wrong with my PC these days. It's not been working normally; it runs slowly and freezes sometimes. I'm practicing how to use ; and :. It will be handy if I learn proper use of them. I'm not familiar to with PC stuff and I'm wondering if it can be fixed. I'd be troubled without a PC, but I don't want to buy a new one if possible. It's expensive ;( I cannot afford it this month. I hope I can have it fixed cheap. Doesn't it sound like I will fix my PC by myself?

 

Great use of the semi-colon! I think even native English speakers are often uncertain when to use a colon or a semi-colon.  I hope you can get your PC fixed! Enjoy your day off! 

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hmm about your PC, maybe you can check the background process. What OS do you use?

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