Write about a bad experience .
Yesterday I went away from Hospital . I stayed there for 3 day because I have a pleurisy. I'm very unfortunate :( My parents were worried too. Today I stay at home and I'm boring but better to stay home than to stay in hospital ( maybe this phrase is wrong )I hope to heal quickly before New Year's Day. i want to celebrate with my new friends. Today I ate only a little bit a soup. Seem that I'm depressed but that it isn't, I'm a persone positive usually. I always see the half full glass! I mind that I die young because I am always sick. Thank God it will be Christmas Day soon.
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Write about a bad experience .
Yesterday I went away from left the Hospital hospital. I stayed was there for 3 days because I have a pleurisy. I'm very unfortunate unlucky :( My parents were worried. too. Today, I'm staying at home and I'm boring bored, but it's better to stay home than to stay in the hospital ( maybe this phrase is wrong )I hope to heal quickly before New Year's Day. i I want to celebrate with my new friends. Today, I ate only a little bit a of soup. Seem It may seem like that I'm depressed but that it isn't the case; I'm a persone positive usually very positive. I always see the half full glass as half full! I mind that I don't want to die young because I am always sick. Thank God it will be Christmas Day soon.
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Oh, dear... That is so sad. You are unfortunate indeed, because it seems to be a serious disease. I hope the hospital sent you home, because your health is improving and not for other reasons. Too bad you could only eat soup today, but luckily you were able to eat at least something. I hope you get well soon enough so you can celebrate Christmas with your family and New Year with your friends. Keep your head up. You are stronger than your disease!
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I hope you get better soon
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Thank u so much Ibrahem :))
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Oh :/
God help you and don't say like that . and that phrase is wrong as you excepted before @@ "its better to stay at home than hospital" and another thing "today I ate a little bit soup (there is no need for another a before soup ) " good writing and I hope for you to be good as soon as possible to celebrate with your friends. Have a good time ^_^
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