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My English class
Hi, last week a new British teacher came to my class, , his name's Rob and he is from UK but he's working now in Spain for two years because he loves Spain and I found that he can work here one year longer. He loves our beaches but he's very white so he always has to use a lot of sun cream. He's a fantastic person and he's very good-looking, but he has big ears, he said that he hates his ears. I going to tell you about the class (??) next week. Bye. xx Irene
My English class
Hi, the last week in my class, he came a new british teacher came, his name's Rob and he lives from in the UK, but he's been working now in Spain now for two years because he loves Spain. and I found out that he can work here for one more year more. He loves us beaches but he's very white, so he he always has to use have always that he use very sun cream. (May also use the word, sunscreen.) He's a fantastic person and he's very good-looking, but he have a has big ears, he said that he hates his ears. I going to tell yours the next week.- Not sure what you mean by this sentence. Bye. xx Irene
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My English class
Hi, the last week a new teacher attended my English class, he is from Britain and his name is Rob. and He lives in the UK but he is now working in Spain for two years, because he loves Spain and I discovered that he will be working here for another year. He loves our beaches but he is very white and so he always has to use a lot of sun cream. He is a fantastic person and he is very good looking, but he does have a big ears, he said that he hates his ears. I am going to tell you more the next week. Bye. xx Irene
( I hope that he tells you about over using the apostrophe).
Good luck Irene.
My English class
Hi, the last week a new British teacher took over in my class, he came a new british teacher, his name is Rob and he lives comes from the UK but right now he's working now in Spain on a for two year's contract because he loves Spain; and I found discovered that he can work here for one more year more. He loves us our beaches but he's very white, so he have always that he needs to use very a lot of sun cream. He's a fantastic person and he's very good-looking, but he have a has big ears and says he said that he hate his ears. I going to tell yours the you more next week. Bye. xx Irene
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