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it's only a spark but it keeps me going <3 well, i'm gonna tell you what happenned to me last weekend, after a year and eight months aproximately i broke up with my boyfriend, and i know i should feel bad about it , but i dont. may it is because for me it has already died a long time ago or maybe never has been alive... i'm just writing it down here because i think i have to let it go somehow... now i'm gonna get back to my life doing what i love and to enjoy my family and friends i still don't understand why a person who's suppossed to love you and help you with whatever you need and just make you happy can be so mean. but i guess it's something i had to learn, so now i have to start my life again and it seems to be that i'm a lucky person because it is not as hard as i thought it would be for me :)

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"It's Only a Spark but it Keeps Me Going"

     well, i'm gonna tell you This is what happenned to me last weekend. After about a year and eight months aproximately I broke up with my boyfriend. and I know that I should feel bad, about it but I don't.
     Maybe it this is because for me it has our relationship had already died a long time ago; or maybe it was never has been alive. I'm just writing it down here because I think that I have to let it go somehow. 
     Now I'm gonna going to get back to my life and doing what I love; and to enjoying my family and friends. I still don't understand why how a person who's suppossed to love you, and help you with whatever you need, and just make you happy can be so mean. but I guess it's this is something that I had to learn. so now I have to start my life again, and it seems to be that I'm a lucky, person because it is living without my boyfriend has not been as hard as I thought it would be. for me  

     Rocio, remember to start new sentences when the subject you are writing about changes. The personal pronoun "I" is always capitalized. You did not write about the "spark" in the title. What is the "spark"? Good job!

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