Facebook and the false people.

I wonder who are the faithful people. I say that because tomorrow is my birthday and I want to know who is going to recall my birthday date. Every year people look at Facebook and automatically know your birthday date. So I'm sure that I'm going to be deceived by the result but nevertheless I'm going to see exactly who are the false people and who are the faithful people, because for the time being I can see the difference because everybody "knows" my birthday date via Facebook.

Facebook and real friends.

I wonder who are my real friends. I say that because tomorrow is my birthday and I want to know who are going to recall my birthday. Every year people look at Facebook and they automatically know your birthday. So, I'm sure that I'm going to be deceived by the results. Nevertheless, I'm going to see exactly who are my real friends and who are not. For the time being, I can see the difference because everybody "knows" my birthday via Facebook.

"Faithful people" sounds religious. You can say "real friends." "Fake friends" will also work instead of saying "false people." "Birthday" is a date so there is no need to say "birthday date." It is easier to read and understand three shorter sentences instead of one very long one.

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